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Jessica Hutchins's avatar

My character would like to be famous for her warmth and hospitality, symbolized by the homemade pie with the messy crust.

Maybe I’ll try to memorize more of George Oppen’s Of Being Numerous- a poem I’ve been revisiting consistently since 1994

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Chris Beach's avatar

Thanks for these prompts :-) 1. One of the characters in the novel I’m writing is a 12-year-old boy named Leon Daniels, he’s the remaining son of a family of pig farmer bow hunters. The family moved away from their home in Boone County, West Virginia, where many of his generations “survived” as coal miners. What Leon doesn’t want to be remembered for is the still in the shack out back with its white lightening moonshine, its murderous madness and mayhem. What he would love to be remembered as is a tap dancer more famous than his dead uncle, Jesco White, who died in his beat up old white pick up doing 360’s on the muddy slopes of Pilot Knob.

2. My character Esperanza Bastante will miss my father. He spoke Spanish with her; he made her feel more beautiful than any other woman on the whole base. He made her feel it was worth holding her head high. His blond hair and blue eyes and that smile that said, “all that matters is this moment together.” Though short lived, their secret rendezvouses, all those many years ago linger like chilies and oils rising from the warm earth.

3. Every time I met Lucky, Leon’s golden retriever, I felt safe and eager for play and adventure. He’d lick my hand, and after running the woods and fields of Battle Hill, with its rusted musket balls, belt buckles and arrow heads, Lucky let me wrap my arms around him while we lay in the grass watching the clouds rearrange themselves in the sky until our pounding ribs slowed to a single breath.

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